Comments on: It’s a new dawn, it’s a new day

By: Ingrid

Ingrid — Mon, 05 Nov 2007 15:15:54 +0000

No Zazz, you were not absent minded. Radar Detector was trapped in my spam filter and first popped up after you answered! So – you were there first! :)

And thanks for the suggestions, I am going to move some stuff to museums and/or art galleries.

I feel like an idiot that I didn’t think of that myself, I guess I was the absent minded one.

By: Zazz

Zazz — Mon, 05 Nov 2007 15:10:12 +0000

I must have been completely absentminded… or has the comment of Radar Detector popped up after I’ve sent mine? Museum, art gallery, it is all mentioned already. And I just babbled along and pretended to come up with a brand new idea (which, actually, as for me, I did). Leastwise you liked the suggestions… :)

By: Jill

Jill — Mon, 05 Nov 2007 10:46:16 +0000

Yes, the feeling chilly happens to me too :) But I knew it – you rock ;)

Your characters could also meet in e.g. a concert or a play

By: Radar Detector

Radar Detector — Mon, 05 Nov 2007 04:22:30 +0000

Hi Ingrid! the fact that you are aware that there is still room for improvements on what you are working on, is a good sign that you are in the right direction.

on characters:

I have a friend who is so unaware of his habit that every time he tells us something about someone or about anything at all he ends up talking about how good he is, and this happens all the time.

I’m not sure if you might want to include someone like him in your story. He can be annoying sometimes but most of the time i just find it funny how he does it, end every story that he tells complimenting himself.

Hope everything goes well Ingrid

Radar Detector

By: Ingrid

Ingrid — Sun, 04 Nov 2007 20:24:41 +0000

Thanks all. Just know: So much better – doesn’t mean that it is great. It is just less crappy than last time, which is, I guess, progress.

@Zazz – meeting places – for rendezvous mostly. So Museum and Art Gallery are excellent suggestions which now will be used.

@Robtheblob – yes they say that love flowers there (5 items) but truly I have never seen it, and God nows I’ve often tried that queue.

By: kate

kate — Sun, 04 Nov 2007 20:23:15 +0000

That is great news, Ingrid! I was really pleased to read this post. It’ll make it so much easier to

Meeting places … museum of natural history … down by the river … photography or some other kind of class depending on their interests. Ummm… I’m not so good with this meeting stuff, but left to my own devices, I could probably come up with a bunch of other spots too.

I have a hunch you will get the next batch of writing done in fewer than 35 days!

Here’s a hug,
kate ox

By: Robtheblob

Robtheblob — Sun, 04 Nov 2007 20:17:58 +0000

great news, I’d say! I heard in London people often meet queuing up for the under three items counter (?) at M&S’s ;)

By: Miek

Miek — Sun, 04 Nov 2007 10:57:47 +0000

Wauw!!! so glad to hear that this time it was so much better, I knew you could do it , next weekend take a break and after that New York, you deserve that!! ;-)

By: winter solstice

winter solstice — Sun, 04 Nov 2007 09:39:58 +0000

Well done! As Zazz said, being able to do something creative with criticism is a rare gift.

By: Anne

Anne — Sun, 04 Nov 2007 08:39:59 +0000

I knew you could do it! :-)